Monday, October 20, 2008
Tending Bar
The bottles lines up behind me
labels facing out, pourers facing left,
necks reaching up
The customers talk
to me,
at me,
around me,
rarely (but sometimes) with me
I smile, I ask, they answer,
I pour
liquids in pretty colors
into
glasses in pretty lines
topped with
garnishes with pretty shapes.
An entire culture
with expectations, customs, games,
and attempts at getting by
built upon this
pretty poison.
I facilitate
bonding,
escapism,
relaxation,
enjoyment,
addiction
without a second thought--
and I wipe the bar clean
for the next one.
Info:
Editing status: Unedited. Very unedited.
Composed: 20 October 2008
Submissions: None
Inspiration: I recently started bartending, and it fascinates me, everything that goes on at a bar--and how often I have to go without noticing it because I have to focus on bringing in money for the bar and for myself.
labels facing out, pourers facing left,
necks reaching up
The customers talk
to me,
at me,
around me,
rarely (but sometimes) with me
I smile, I ask, they answer,
I pour
liquids in pretty colors
into
glasses in pretty lines
topped with
garnishes with pretty shapes.
An entire culture
with expectations, customs, games,
and attempts at getting by
built upon this
pretty poison.
I facilitate
bonding,
escapism,
relaxation,
enjoyment,
addiction
without a second thought--
and I wipe the bar clean
for the next one.
Info:
Editing status: Unedited. Very unedited.
Composed: 20 October 2008
Submissions: None
Inspiration: I recently started bartending, and it fascinates me, everything that goes on at a bar--and how often I have to go without noticing it because I have to focus on bringing in money for the bar and for myself.
Tags:
2008,
form poetry,
humanity,
October 2008,
poetry,
reflection,
unedited
Telling the Hours
Twenty-four hours in a day
Eight for sleep
Two for gym
Six for class
Five for study
Eight for work
Two for nourishment
One for play
Ten for love
Oops.
The numbers don't add up--
I never was all that good at math.
Info:
Editing status: Unedited. Very unedited.
Composed: 20 October 2008
Submissions: None
Inspiration: I'm always so busy and never have time for everything I need or want to do. I've been considering reconsidering my priorities so I can shift my commitments around, but haven't had the time. Case in point.
Eight for sleep
Two for gym
Six for class
Five for study
Eight for work
Two for nourishment
One for play
Ten for love
Oops.
The numbers don't add up--
I never was all that good at math.
Info:
Editing status: Unedited. Very unedited.
Composed: 20 October 2008
Submissions: None
Inspiration: I'm always so busy and never have time for everything I need or want to do. I've been considering reconsidering my priorities so I can shift my commitments around, but haven't had the time. Case in point.
Untitled
What is the point of poetry?
A poem is a story
in snack form
A story is an epic
cut short.
What are you trying to say?
Stop starving me.
Info:
Editing status: Unedited. Very unedited.
Composed: 20 October 2008
Submissions: None
Inspiration: Reading a poetry collection and thinking about the "why" behind the writing.
A poem is a story
in snack form
A story is an epic
cut short.
What are you trying to say?
Stop starving me.
Info:
Editing status: Unedited. Very unedited.
Composed: 20 October 2008
Submissions: None
Inspiration: Reading a poetry collection and thinking about the "why" behind the writing.
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